Mecha Sally

Mmm, a bit disappointing. There's some nice glossy shading on Mecha Sally's chassis and some moderate variation to the hue in the shading. I especially like the level of detail you added to her eyes.  Unfortunately, the inking is substandard, especially around Mecha Sally's forearms where it gets really messy. The imagery itself doesn't work at all. There's no emotional impact whatsoever because you didn't give any consideration on how to pose the characters. What's Mecha Sally doing? Staring at the sky? Why isn't she attacking Sonic? And why is Sonic just standing around looking at her? The composition is unbalanced, featuring a large foreground character in the bottom-right corner against a barren, disgracefully drawn landscape that looks like you spent all of five minutes painting. Hell, I don't even know what those flaming capsules are supposed to be. This image just smacks of wanting to draw Mecha Sally without putting any thought into anything else in the picture. Oh, and you might want to stop looking at Pony videos while you're recording the process.